Storyboarding course, final assignment!

Heya guys!
Click Here to download the pitch for my final assignment (sorry about the length, it's a 104mb DivX .avi that goes for 15 min :-S).

I really bit off much more than I could chew with this assignment and this is closer to a rough first draft than a final board (some of it very VERY rough :-P ). It was a very late night and a huge challenge when I recorded the pitch, I hope it's comprehensible :-/. My story still needs a lot more breaking before it'll be solid (it's more like jelly now), but I feel there's a story worth telling somewhere in there. I'm pretty keen to hear anyone's comments, please contribute! :-D

This course was awesome, I feel like I could do it over again and I'd still learn loads.


Olivier Ladeuix said...

my line is very slow, it will take a while before I can view it but I had a look at the jpeg and that looks like a pretty nice story!


KineticDan said...

Wow Oli, you can judge the quality of a story just be a singe panel? That's talent :-).

Thanks for dropping bye dude!

smearframe said...

hey Dan
I think you have a great story here. i really enjoyed watching the pitch. i am just wondering if the story would work the same if you take your vocal pitch out.

I am interested in the steven silver course at schoolism.. Lets see !

keep rocking